You improved a lot, especially with a stronger sense of anatomy and color. But I liked the background of the original one more. The chain-link fence bg with blood is more appealing. Maybe combine it with the new one?
yep, you have reason, but I have a problem, on first drawing I made the BG with photoshop and differents brushes, but on second drawing I have a photoshop but no brushes.. I made the second BG with illust with the drawing directly T_T